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Poetic Crush

HiddenINK[Offline] Date added: 07/22/2007
Total Votes :  9
Poem Rating :  9
Poem Views: 99

This is the part of life where I've worked so hard to withstand
But then your mystic beauty demand to be scanned
Disarrayed and afraid I hold there to decay
Not knowing what to convey, I prayed up the courage to communicate without delay
I reconizge that you were unblemished, realized your love was so pure, so unadulterated
You've mated and dated, baited only to be rated
But I wanted to put your whole life in befuddlement
It hasn't been a moment of movement where I don't reminisce from a distant
I can't extract you, every couple evokes momories of a crush that now lies in a poetical dust
Forever Hidden, My Poetic Crush

HiddenINK
 Author: HiddenINK
 Posted by: HiddenINK
Comments (2):
lpjh-do[Offline]lpjh-dosays:
Total Critiques:
381
that was sweet...especially the way things go around here....you could lose sight of your "Poetic Crush" in a flash
08/05/2007
shy[Offline]shysays:
Total Critiques:
32
I enjoyed this piece and I must say... very nicely done ... Shy
07/22/2007
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