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HomePoetic Mic Poem --- ~I Didn’t See My Story in the Paper~

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~I Didn’t See My Story in the Paper~

soulofwordz[Offline] Date added: 06/30/2007
Total Votes :  10
Poem Rating :  10
Poem Views: 193

I didn’t see my story in the paper.

I labored and labored, fought and fought
Looked for my part in the paper,
But I didn’t see my story.

I wrote the lines, constructed the structure,
Functioned till my heart ruptured,
But still I didn’t see my story.

I breathed the fibers of the page
Let my anger rage on the page
Made way for my emotion and devotion to be felt in every line that I quoted,
And I still didn’t see my story.

I put it all on the line to make the blind see.
Make them see that they are being led blindly
And I kindly faced adversity
Even in anxiety of them hurting me,
But still nothing killed me more than not seeing my story.

And I should have known they’d put the chrome eraser to the page and erase her-
Erase ME.
Leave me without a face see…
They didn’t want to hear me spout off at the mouth
And be apart of the news daily.
That’s why YOU didn’t see my story.

I was driving by at a speed of 55 in a 65
So there is no reason why I should have been pulled over.
And moreover I had no right to have the blinding lights come harassing
Because our “colors” were clashing
And my passion was to live life by the law.
Somewhere in there I see a flaw
And I see nothing any more
All because of the driver of that police car.
And that is the reason why I didn’t see my story.

soulofwordz
 Author: Soulofwordz
 Posted by: soulofwordz
Comments (5):
blueyez[Offline]blueyezsays:
Total Critiques:
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Racial profiling is most def. a problem in america! I think some places more than others but this was full of truth!
Much props!
Peace and Love
01/16/2008
BLOSSOM[Offline]BLOSSOMsays:
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76
i hate racial profiling and you expressed it as meek as you could...soul of words...felt the read....love blossom
12/23/2007
blksknlady09[Offline]blksknlady09says:
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8
deep!
07/26/2007
freeuplove[Offline]freeuplovesays:
Total Critiques:
446
your words are truly soulful and felt...thank you for expressing them.
07/16/2007
Tishmeek[Offline]Tishmeeksays:
Total Critiques:
3
I loved the way you use you words to describe thw way the feelings r felt
06/30/2007
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