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HomePoetic Mic Poem --- I MADE PLANS WITH HER STRUGGLE

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I MADE PLANS WITH HER STRUGGLE

deepthought[Offline] Date added: 06/19/2007
Total Votes :  30
Poem Rating :  10
Poem Views: 210

“I MADE PLANS WITH HER STRUGGLE”

Lovers
Rebels to be
Tomorrow lacks chemistry
Yesterday unheard sips
Beauty seen through mocha scene
Classroom sentences
Yearbook photos
Blame angelic flights
Made plans with her struggle
Keep names
Notebook untouchable
Daydreams can’t get away
Somewhere far
Quiet showers
Nude classic
One love needs
This planet, Earth criteria
Probations smile
Mathematics bite of apples
No said date
Vintage daybreak
Break up wildflower
Clutch pen pal swagger
Yours
Freshness power play
She says freedom
He says forge signatures
Next lifetime past
Introduce butterfly punctuation
Present
Drop pen’s confidence
Rescue me
Breath into microphones altar
Fiend
Yes
Early plans made
Undress laughter of sight
Direct hit
Sleeper hold
Conscious making, unconscious red adore lover
Footsteps inhaling Atlantis injection of lethal pounding!

deepthought
 Author: DEEPTHOUGHT
 Posted by: deepthought
Comments (6):
reed01[Offline]reed01says:
Total Critiques:
261
Nice wordplay!
peace
reed01
06/26/2007
achilles22[Offline]achilles22says:
Total Critiques:
48
Wow the way you use words amazes me

my favorite part:

Clutch pen pal swagger

i just love the way that line flows

keep writing

Achilles
06/21/2007
achilles22[Offline]achilles22says:
Total Critiques:
48
Wow the way you use words amazes me

my favorite part:

Clutch pen pal swagger

i just love the way that line flows

keep writing

Achilles
06/21/2007
achilles22[Offline]achilles22says:
Total Critiques:
48
Wow the way you use words amazes me

my favorite part:

Clutch pen pal swagger

i just love the way that line flows

keep writing

Achilles
06/21/2007
NenitaMala[Offline]NenitaMalasays:
Total Critiques:
78
You never cease to amaze me....I'm digging your style. Much love...Nenita
06/20/2007
mystic_i_69[Offline]mystic_i_69says:
Total Critiques:
1534
WHO DID THAT! BEDD NOT NOBODY FORGE NO SIGNATURES!!! THAT WIL BE A NO NO....
LOVE READING YOUR WORK DEEPTHOUGHT...NEVER STOP WRITING!
PEACE AND BLESSINGS
MYSTIC
OL,OA
06/20/2007
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