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Primitive vows

timid01[Offline] Date added: 05/20/2007
Total Votes :  10
Poem Rating :  10
Poem Views: 114

We moved in unison, barely touching skin
inhaling one another's urges and exhaling deeply
our sensualities with kisses laid flush on warm skin
and sweet sweat joining us as one
sexually and spiritually we floated above blue skies
and found ourselves laying across an Autumn moon
glowing softly your outline, we tasted and felt
ecstasies unreal as we climaxed and climaxed
and crushed wave after wave, heavily needing
tenderly breathing with each thrust and caress
I held you steady and you kept me close
we rode the summer solstice leaving the covers below
us, we, you and I, found one another aching and grinding
drowning and waking every moan and whisper
beneath each stride, you taught me and I completed you
resting slowly, moving blissfully, we never lost our stare
I became yours and you became mine....and together...

timid01
 Author: timid01
 Posted by: timid01
Comments (1):
mystic_i_69[Offline]mystic_i_69says:
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Love on one acord....such a vivid picture comes to mine as i read this one timid.......Wow!!!
Peace & Blessings
Mystic
ol,oa
05/20/2007
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