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Immersed In Love

blueyez[Offline] Date added: 05/01/2007
Total Votes :  9
Poem Rating :  9
Poem Views: 120

I'm so full of Love
I think I might burst
Like one drop of water
When dying of thirst

Overwhelming my heart
And immersed in my soul
Anticipation of what
This love would entoll

Pleasure filled thoughts
My mind's lost at sea
Dreaming of stars that
Would sparkle for me

The jewels I treasure
Are through that which you see
Your beautiful eyes
Are only for me

Impressed by the very
Thought of your hands
So strong that they take me
To far away lands

Carried away in
Our very first kiss
And all of my life
It was you that I missed

blueyez
 Posted by: blueyez
Comments (3):
SB-lovely[Offline]SB-lovelysays:
Total Critiques:
298
very nice read Sis...peace SB-Lovely
11/14/2007
dow3luvkidz[Offline]dow3luvkidzsays:
Total Critiques:
246
very very nice poem blueyez...
09/27/2007
t3_b4[Offline]t3_b4says:
Total Critiques:
416
well that was just the most delicious thoughts Lady blueyez...love your poetry...yes i do!!!!
09/06/2007
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