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i didn' know she talked like that

PHILLY[Offline] Date added: 05/06/2005
Total Votes :  25
Poem Rating :  7.5
Poem Views: 154

yes it's me agian
get on the phone and tell your friends
because it's time for me to cuss and shout
that's the only way you understand what i'm talking about
ready here we go
f*ck
you and tell your friends
thits is the way the story begins
talk behind my back
tell you the truth i tried heard not to react
i don't usually play these kiddie games
but you got me confused talking sh*t
about my name
and noticed iv'e only cussed twice
but wait until the end of the night
i hate to call you a b*tch

but thats the only word that fits
we use to be friends
cut you off because you pretend
telling all of my business
it's my time now shut the f*ck
up and listen
it's not my fault because your a whore
man found out that's why he don't love you no more
around the way known for sucking dick
no need to explain why your breath smell like sh*t
you
like to be talked to real dirty
stop acting like a kid b*tch
ain't you almost thirty
i told you f*ck
once before
that's right i also called you a whore
you know you f*cked
up now you want to let it be four
four babies daddies and you sh*t
talking about me
got me jumping out of character
not a violent person but b*tch
i'll come after you
i never once gave a f*ck
about how you feel
b*tch
you crossed the line so lets' keep it real
keep my name out your f*cking
mouth
this is the last time i'm telling you before i show you what i'm about
you know i play my part because i'm a classy lady
but for you i change into the gorrilla don't f*ck
with me baby
now that ive got that of my chest
you f*ck
with me your f*cking
with the best
i'm sorry for the langauge that came out of my mouth
that's the only way they understand what i'm talking about
and please the next time you talk to your friends
remind them never to mention my f*cking
name again
thank you

PHILLY
 Author: philly
 Posted by: PHILLY
Comments (5):
MsWizard[Offline]MsWizardsays:
Total Critiques:
13
Oh I can't TELL you how much I identify with that one! Excellent!
10/15/2007
Miljowil[Offline]Miljowilsays:
Total Critiques:
327
WOW!!! These are feelings that we have all felt at least once before. I have never put them into poetry though. But just as I wrote my first erotic poem...There is a first time for everything. You vented girl....in a way that no one else has ever (at least to my knowledge)....I hope she got the message. I sure did!
10/06/2007
mystic_i_69[Offline]mystic_i_69says:
Total Critiques:
1534
O.K.then....sounded like Scar Face too.....when you f'in with me you f'in with the best......let it out!!
08/02/2007
angel2u41[Offline]angel2u41says:
Total Critiques:
864
wow!! try not to get to upset....good write bad feelings should come out to make room for good feelings
Keep expressing!
Peace
angel2u41
ol,oa
04/24/2007
Empress[Offline]Empresssays:
Total Critiques:
201
Okay Philly I am feeling u on this! VENT gurl but keep ur nails....
05/24/2005
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