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54495-319145[Offline] Date added: 08/15/2006
Total Votes :  70
Poem Rating :  10
Poem Views: 1762

Gravity’s defied,
insanity’s defined as
brothers screaming keep it real
while living a lie
which parts of your sisters
do you choose to defile?
The breasts or thighs...
Why not try,
looking into their eyes
and making love to their minds.
The windows to their souls
have been swollen and shut close
on the receiving end of egotistical blows
victimized by our spiritual assault and battery
makes them unable to see
their moment of clarity..
Pimps up, hoes down
immature minded brothers slowdown
our ascension will never take place
without the presence of our women’s grace.
These so called hoes
we so proudly disrespect
will become the anchors
that snap our emasculated necks.
Gravity’s defied,
insanity’s defined as
cultural exploitation
without intellectual representation.
This generation
has succumbed to frustration.
That black on black situation
will no longer be tolerated.
It is our own self hatred
which makes us the most hated.
The last real n*gger
alive
found it hard to survive
when the first intelligent brother
put an end to his genocide
Young brothers stand up
pump your fists, put your hands up
but first...pull your damn pants up.
Respectability demanded
can never be denied.
Your mis education has been scripted.
You're being force fed lies.
Neighborhood drug czars
are spending decades behind bars
for possession of a few crack viles
while, some affluent suburbanite
with a kilo of cocaine
never sees trial.
For these racist laws
we must thank none other than
Nelson D. Rockefeller y’all
who was nothing more
than another wealthy, racist bastard
*and that’s who Jay-Z,
chose to name his company after*.
Gravity’s defied,
insanity’s defined as
tracing the aids epidemic
to the distribution of free needles
back to neighborhood health clinics.
Homosexual and Haitians were targeted
and unknowingly spread the pollution
when they were given tainted fluids
during emergency blood transfusions.
The depths of this governments treachery
defies human logic.
Spread the disease
withhold the knowledge
while increasing government funding
and medicinal profits.
Yet how were they supposed to know
so many white Americans slept with blacks
and were pseudo heterosexuals
who hadn’t yet come out of the closet.
These aren’t just words I am writing.
This isn’t just poetry I’m reciting.
This is realistic, humanistic
grown folk business
this is the real world...
So stop existing in it
and start living in it.

54495-319145
 Author: 54495-319145
 Posted by: 54495-319145
Comments (7):
freeuplove[Offline]freeuplovesays:
Total Critiques:
446
WOW....this was FIRE!!! especially the part about Jay-Z......thanks for the freestyle 5
11/14/2007
t3_b4[Offline]t3_b4says:
Total Critiques:
417
immature minded brothers slow down...our ascension will never take place
without the presence of our women's grace......and pull your damn pants up.....

say so Brother 5....i enjoyed this read....i mean real world free style...zoom on they azz....peace

thewell
07/31/2007
jsapphire[Offline]jsapphiresays:
Total Critiques:
57
this is one of my favorite pieces!! truth spit raw and unapologeticly, forcing us to face reality, and I LOVE EVERY LINE!!!!! Great write!!
Much Luv!
02/11/2007
Juspassionat[Offline]Juspassionatsays:
Total Critiques:
371
Humph! Power to the People, they ain't gon' hear this @ the places with the steeples....True story.... Peace and Love, Jus
01/12/2007
soulion[Offline]soulionsays:
Total Critiques:
31
this is on point. I'm gonna go to your page to read more. Straight up consciouseness. In meekness, I thank you. Peace and blessings
08/21/2006
Virtuous[Offline]Virtuoussays:
Total Critiques:
73
dayuummm...knowledge spit at its finest..."Young brothers stand up
pump your fists, put your hands up
but first...pull your damn pants up." "Homosexual and Haitians were targeted
and unknowingly spread the pollution
when they were given tainted fluids
during emergency blood transfusions".".Neighborhood drug czars
are spending decades behind bars
for possession of a few crack viles
while, some affluent suburbanite
with a kilo of cocaine
never sees trial."...
.just a few of my favorite lines in this piece....let me take this sto school so I can educate these fools...lol.... you put this down with the urgency that is needed in society today....definetly keep versin...we need it....peace..."V"
08/16/2006
Virtuous[Offline]Virtuoussays:
Total Critiques:
73
dayuummm...knowledge spit at its finest..."Young brothers stand up
pump your fists, put your hands up
but first...pull your damn pants up." "Homosexual and Haitians were targeted
and unknowingly spread the pollution
when they were given tainted fluids
during emergency blood transfusions".".Neighborhood drug czars
are spending decades behind bars
for possession of a few crack viles
while, some affluent suburbanite
with a kilo of cocaine
never sees trial."...
.just a few of my favorite lines in this piece....let me take this sto school so I can educate these fools...lol.... you put this down with the urgency that is needed in society today....definetly keep versin...we need it....peace..."V"
08/16/2006
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