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Poetic Mic Poetry - Poetic Mic Poem --- Thank you very much Mrs Bobbitt ( note: 'Lobola' is a local word for the bride price men pay to the womans family)
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HomePoetic Mic Poem --- Thank you very much Mrs Bobbitt ( note: 'Lobola' is a local word for the bride price men pay to the womans family)

PoeticMic.com Poem: Thank you very much Mrs Bobbitt ( note: 'Lobola' is a local word for the bride price men pay to the womans family)

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Thank you very much Mrs Bobbitt ( note: 'Lobola' is a local word for the bride price men pay to the womans family)

Zimbwoy[Offline] Date added: 07/12/2006
Total Votes :  7
Poem Rating :  7
Poem Views: 186

She cried in the dark
Pride lay still
But awake in her heart
She had wanted to make love
He wanted to f*ck
She
wanted more
He had had more than enough

So he carelessly lay
Half asleep without a loving word to say
She stayed huddled in pain
The love inside her tortured bloodied and slain
'Only whores ask' he said
He had paid lobola so f*ck
it he was going to play!
NO did not mean no
No meant pain
At least that is what his slaps had translated
Again and again
and again…

Sorry meant everything was normal

Sorry meant he had had a long day

Sorry meant she would shop and he would pay.

Her silence broke his rules.
Her silence he could not use.
He rolled off her in anger
And fell asleep soon after.
The perfect stranger,
Unaware of any danger.

She cried in the dark
Pride lay still but awake in her heart.
He said , 'Pain comes only to make you understand'
And she wished him wisdom
As she raised the sharp knife in her hand…

Zimbwoy
 Author: Brian J Manthenga
 Posted by: Zimbwoy
Comments (3):
newLi-8[Offline]newLi-8says:
Total Critiques:
36
this was wild and you are right Zimbwoy....but you never know what a person will do...but me personally i would NEVER do what she did i would walk away first....peace....newLi8
01/12/2008
Zimbwoy[Offline]Zimbwoysays:
Total Critiques:
3
With Love hopefully never again
10/25/2007
freeuplove[Offline]freeuplovesays:
Total Critiques:
446
i remember this......
10/20/2007
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