Okay, So I just got off the phone with you,
I had to look into your eyes before I went to sleep.
I missed you...
I was so glad to hear your voice. I prayed the
prayer that ask GOD to keep you here if it be his
blessed will. If he took you, I would understand
in time, I just asked him to help me endure in the
meantime.. Then you called... Well, I was
prepared for the worst.. Even though just last
night in church I was wishing you were there to
share.. Share my everything.... holding hands as
we bowed our heads in prayer. Praying for each
other.. sharing our most hidden deepest secrets,
wishes, dreams.. despairs.....I mean, when I told
you that I care about you, I do...But I really
haven`t known you long enough too.. I am so
attracted to you, not just physical.. that fades,
but I have seen the cover and want to get lost in
the pages... I become flush from just the thought
of you and the rush...it just seems so right.. It`s
beautiful.. I can only image what your minds eyes
holds
I could ask, but sometimes, I think it may be to
bold..
I can`t help but openly share, I swear that you are
an answer to a prayer (am I?)
I can`t help but talk about you all the time.
I haven`t spaked it but I claim you as mine.
At night as I hold my pillow tight,I can only
image the beat of your heart in my ear...
I wish you nearer.. but it`s like you are already
here...
Have you set up tent in my heart, if so you need to
explain, what that`s all about..
I hope I am not scaring you away, I hope it`s
mutual and shared...
You are a gift from GOD to me.. If you change
your mind tomorrow.
I would wish you nothing but GOD`s goodness.
I might regret not having rubbed and prayed you
down with glory grease..
But I would never want to disrupt your inner
peace...
When I said I never want to hurt, or cause you
any pain.
I understand that your past may have brought
your rain. I just want to chase the clouds away...
okay, I digress...
.Good night. I am going to lay on your chest, I
mean get some rest...
You know it is true love that defines the nature of the character of so many people, and I can clearly see that love was the nature of the existence of ink that was dried upon the pages that bore the mark of these beautiful words. It took me back to the few but rare times of love that I have experienced and within my heart it seems only natural that I can relate to these words. Saddens the mind of the inclement years of torment and sorrow that pain of life bears upon a relationship, but still beauty is love and love is beautiful. Excellent!
Keep Writing,
-tf 06/16/2006
This is a nice poem, you have a true talent of writing. It had nice imagery, nice flow, and it kept me wanting to read. Keep it up, Peace and Love! 05/02/2006
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