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HomePoetic Mic Poem --- Exhibitionist (2/18/05)

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Exhibitionist (2/18/05)

jannilove[Offline] Date added: 02/24/2005
Total Votes :  38
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Poem Views: 171

He loves to do it in public,
enjoys the thrill of a crowd.
and I don't mind following him,
as our love is strong,
so we end up in smoky dim lit rooms
in glam places making love
as the men slow down to gaze at the
women with the loud faces,
whom have stop to watch us.
some of the pretty girls
grind lonely hips against
dead empty air, with eyes closed,
giving them a chance to fantasize wishes
about wanting to switch his stroke
upon my spine, eager to replace
his fingertips position
to be giving attention instead to
their inner thighs, aching hungry
for a love like mines,
but he don't pay them any mind at all
cause we came together and we're
just here for the feel of the energy
steaming from sweaty crowds, as he
enjoys the pleasure between us even more
when we're in the open and everybody
can see exactly what type of thing we got.
so he begins smoothly, gentle his purpose
as his flesh taps against mines.
while I can't help but to do nothing
other than let out soft continuous moans
yearning for the tease as I can feel
his heart pound as he pulls me closer.
gripping his knees, around my waist
his hold locking tightly as the
rhythm becomes steady and our pace
start to revolutionize, the moment
of breathless seconds intensify
through past screams that seem
to linger with each crash of his fingers.
naturally the people can't help but
to watch in awe as our souls begin to melt.
become fused and melded together
into one body, one voice, one mind.
they can hear the anxiety in my speech
and feel the sweat; steam rising from his skin,
the atmosphere hot, tonight we'll conceive music.
gifts of procreation between true lovers,
as soul mates assimilate and blend,
public display of intimacy,
triggered honey melodies that developed
from one hug, as I can feel the room as it
begins to spin, the people watching can taste
the sweetness of our songs
soul kisses of a drum and her man.

jannilove
 Author: Januari aka Ezili-osun
 Posted by: jannilove
Comments (4):
starASET[Offline]starASETsays:
Total Critiques:
152
as i read it i felt like it was a erotic piece my self.........very nice!!!
10/19/2007
echolane[Offline]echolanesays:
Total Critiques:
16
that was beautifully erotic.....
04/27/2005
Empress[Offline]Empresssays:
Total Critiques:
201
DAMN! JANI CAN I HAVE SOME ahahhahah! WOW gurl that was tight I just loved it! Make me wanna go to one on dem clubs but trust this mami won't be grinding air much love peace....
03/23/2005
PoeticMic[Offline]PoeticMicsays:
Total Critiques:
257
whoa, thats all I have to say. I guess the power of love will affect you in ways that others must "see" to realize how deep it is.
02/25/2005
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